Peer assessment  

Kits Blog 

1.  What do you think is the strongest part of the blog? This could be a certain post, the writing style, the graphic design, the use of alternative media, the images, etc. What makes this element so strong?

 

The thing I like about Kits character blog is the depth and detail she goes into. This allows people reading her blog to have a really clear idea of what Joseph is thinking and going through at that point in time. For example

'Oh my bloody hell. GUESS WHO TURNED UP AT MY DOOR TODAY. Simon. That’s who .

Iguess I should probably explain, when I visited Rwanda during the genocide when I was photographing the war zone when I came across Alex (I think I have mentioned her before) anyway, if I haven't she’s my I adopted daughter and I love her with all my heart but whilst I was there I also came across Alex’s older brother, I unfortunately couldn’t carry them both. Oh who am I kidding? I’m a horrible human ; the real reason I didn’t take Simon is because he would remember . He would remember me readjusting his dead mother to make a better photograph, to make art . to make money , what does that make me ?'

2.  Is there a part of the blog you find confusing? A part that doesn’t seem to quite match the rest or the character for which it was designed? A link for which you don’t understand the connection? Can you give some suggestions for how to improve that part?

 

There is no part of the blog that confusies me or I feel does not match the rest of the blog.

3.  After reading the blog, what would you like to know more about? Is there a post that leaves you with questions? Write down at least two questions to help your partner further develop this blog.

 

After reading the blog one thing i would like to know more about is the post that says 'I need a break from the loneliness that is slowly consuming me'. I think this post could have gone into more detail exactly why Joesph is feeling this and if this because he feels he does not see Alex enuff or because he wants a relationship in his life.

4.  Did you notice any major misspellings or grammatical issues? Please note down anything.

 

The only grammatical issues I noticed was that Kit didnt use capital I's when talking as Joseph.

5.  Did your partner fulfil all the requirements on the Character Blog Requirements handout?

As far as i am concerned Kit completed all of the requirments icludeing the images, four posts written from the perspective of your character from various points in the play and a header with a title that matches your character and blog content 
 


link to Kits charecter blog: http://josephpotterblog.blogspot.co.uk/